Dreams, Like Starry Clouds

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Open Poetry #29

Dreams, Like Starry Clouds

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-10-13 01:15 PM

Night's splendor has passed away;
For as the ghostlit tide of morning tugs
heaven's milky orb, her shimmering diamonds
fade, and sleepy lids open
to meet the breathless, new break of day
All is eclipsed on this ethereal shore
except dreams
gathered like starry clouds
of you.

[This message has been edited by Robert Frazier (10-13-2003 03:45 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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1 posted 2003-10-13 01:59 PM

Welcome home Robert...
we've missed your pennings...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-10-13 02:21 PM

very nicely said...

I enjoyed.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-10-13 03:42 PM

Lovely words, beautiful vision in this one. You have a typo in line three-should be 'shimmering'.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

4 posted 2003-10-13 03:49 PM

Thanks all...esp. Nan for putting the "shimmer" back into my poetry!

Rf

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