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0 posted 2003-10-13 11:23 AM



Adorned

A man likes
to decorate
a woman,
you know

it's in my
very nature
to adorn you

and tonight
I'll dress you
simply

because you're
stunning
in

opals and
love




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1 posted 2003-10-13 11:28 AM


Smiling at you...
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2 posted 2003-10-13 11:34 AM


Lovely it feels when our man wants those things for us. Very nice sentiments of the heart. Touching, so very touching! Wow!
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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3 posted 2003-10-13 11:36 AM


this is Opal's month...

sweet, Ed

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4 posted 2003-10-13 11:41 AM


Opals are good... Love is good... Yep...
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5 posted 2003-10-13 11:47 AM


Opals are incredibly lovely... love is even more so. *S* The lady lucky enough to wear both is indeed blessed. *S*

I love this tender beauty! *S*

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6 posted 2003-10-13 11:47 AM


Ed...Makes me think of words to song, "you look so good in love".  You write such simple words, but the impact is wonderful!     
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7 posted 2003-10-13 08:50 PM


Very nicely done Ed

The kind of thing that I would like to have written.

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8 posted 2003-10-13 08:54 PM



awwww. that's such a loving poem.

Meg

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9 posted 2003-10-13 09:30 PM


ohhhh wow.....I was looking for the word naked.. so very loving....sensual in images....hugssss
Lauren~


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