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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-10-13 08:51 AM


I’m always turning to see that alluring curve
And the white between your words
In the warm seasons of puffy white clouds, in a clear blue sky
Wearing my new hair do of innocence
While your fingers work with my mind
From head to toe and then some
Like a sequential carpenter whose come back to work
Who had never really gone away for the winter?
Riding the soft alluring waves of spring, in all weather
As echoes soft and memorable, along with forgiveness
The rain now touches softly our skin, smiling as if some
Long secret was awaiting us.
All things are put to rest, in the brightness of the sky
There are no hints of harsh words, or failing hearts
You walk up to me, stop and smile an entire workman’s hands
Where your very thoughts implement destinations
Creating a one man band…..
And the glory of large happiness becomes a symbol of redemption
Like we’re hands within an endless green coast of sleeves
Beating with the wind itself, with a pair of wings
Immeasurable, are our steps growing bigger
While the world quotes cultures and languages
We listen and fondly smile, eating an apple
Right down to the core
We attempted flight…..
Gaining a resonate altitude, in our own leather boots
Falling asleep in the ship of stores, together
Me, with my head upon your shoulder
Filled with stanzas from poems immortal, sinking into our dreams
With the cure of power, attention and admiration
Filling up our souls with mystery, wild and exciting
Genuine free flowing verse…the kind of which you read
And want more and more….soaking up the fragrance of perfume
The way of things, and a conscientious unity
In the bright symbolic countries of our minds

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-10-13 09:03 AM


LeeJ
To fully understand you is like harnessing the wind. Enjoyed

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-10-13 10:41 AM


enjoyed this very much as always,,,

                                                                                   

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