navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Recall
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic Recall Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-13 03:42 AM



Recall

I recognize
it now
you bear
resemblance
to something
I once knew

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-13 03:52 AM


I don't even know how to respond to this, just that I know I should..
pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2003-10-13 03:53 AM


don't know what you meant, exactly, but when i put some "negativity" flavor to it in my mind... i enjoyed it.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-10-13 04:28 AM


yeah, I've felt that before


icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
4 posted 2003-10-13 10:54 AM


I hope it wasn't something like the flu!


Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2003-10-13 11:36 AM


And - if we could retrace those steps.. would we?..
Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
6 posted 2003-10-14 09:43 PM






~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________


[This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-14-2003 09:44 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-10-14 10:02 PM


Helen:

see? I KNOW this soo well
something you once knew
always will, will NEVER be there again
BUT
will never forget
*smile*
xxoo

alisa
Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70
Florida
8 posted 2003-10-15 08:53 AM


i really really like this one....

great work...

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
9 posted 2003-10-15 10:03 AM


enjoyed
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
10 posted 2003-10-15 10:26 AM


It's like a slap in the face when we realize it, isn't it?

Well put.

Susan

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Recall

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary