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pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-13 03:40 AM


breezing through
a cliff of inspiration
can't stop to leave a mark
destinations in between obsessions
washed away...

wander wondering
leaning towards fade-scale
the face- faceless identity
lost memory- short long any
days and day between...

crammed mind
stuffed with roaming echos
need a map
sound once-
puzzled wounded nows.

outside-
a smile
sketch of slither surface
covering the
under


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-13 03:51 AM


"wander wondering
leaning towards fade-scale
the face- faceless identity
lost memory- short long any
days and day between..."

Awesome..

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-10-13 04:03 AM


"breezing through
a cliff of inspiration
can't stop to leave a mark
destinations in between obsessions
washed away..."

are you reading my journals?...lol...h

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2003-10-13 02:07 PM


thx to  you both
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