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Sorry to Offend You
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Sorry to Offend You |
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Kaz Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26 |
Some of my poetry can be a little depressing, so I thought I'd pre-apologise before I post anything else.  Sorry to Offend You Sorry if I offend you in any way I haven't been sleeping these nights And my mind's adrift with thoughts That don't seem to come out right I try to smile to satisfy Those closest to me Just to hide all the pain I hold deep inside of me I'm not a child Though I Know that child Is with me more than I would like Haunting my days and nights Unaware of my grown up needs And that love is not the sweet Candy of my pleasant dreams But she is the soul of me Trying to grow each day Searching for the place Her spirit can dance freely She is the key to my emotions And leaves the door open To the things I try not to let you see But she means well, and she's all of me I'm sorry if she offends you in any way |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wow. Deep and sad, but well written and beautiful! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Whoa that was deep but defienitely worth the read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed the read, and look forward to more from your pen. Oh, and there is nothing offensive about this write. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very sweet. It's always nice to see someone stand for what they believe in!! Very nice. Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry, Kaz. I enjoyed reading your first post. We can't always write happy thoughts. Writing what's in our hearts is the important thing. Thanks for doing that. And please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions. Ethel......garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. You're going to enjoy your time here... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Kaz Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26 |
Thank you for all your comments, and the welcome. I'm looking forward to reading the poetry here. The card was also lovely, thank you Ethel. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Kaz, there's no need to apologize here, as we express all different emotions here and we all have had depressions of our own that togeher we each out to one another and heal and mend! This is a most wonderful debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kaz, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kaz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Welcome to Passion's.This was very deep but profound is what I found. Crystal |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No need for apologies.. Welcome to Passions - It's a comfy place - Settle in and read/write/share...  |
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Kaz Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26 |
Thanks again, everyone. Noah, may love and light always shine upon you too! You are so sweet. Kaz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Who could be offended by this? Sadness isnt offensive...beautiful write and welcome to our world |
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