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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-12 11:33 PM


God only knows how I feel
Where I am at at all times
What I am doing 24/7
And how I am spending my time

God only knows how to help
When I am down and depressed
When I am alone and a mess
When I don't feel loved

God only knows how bad I wish
I wasn't alone and had
A steady guy to love me
All the time

God only knows me
And how I feel
And how to help me deal
With this life I hate

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Kaz
Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26

1 posted 2003-10-13 12:47 PM


Loneliness is the worst feeling in the world, and a person who has never felt unloved and alone would never understand that feeling. You will find there are other people besides God who do though. Sad, but a good write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2003-10-13 11:09 PM


Sweetie...
Hold tight to your own bright light...
You are loved. TD

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-10-13 11:15 PM


I've known that feeling. It's the worst pain I ever knew. I'd sooner die than endure lonliness again, I'll tell you that right now.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-10-15 12:10 PM


Nice...prepare yourself because knows the good things in store for you...James
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
5 posted 2003-10-15 12:58 PM


with god all things are possable,,,

                                                                                   

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