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Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2003-10-12 10:18 PM


Today and Tomorrow
10/12/03

Will you love me today,
And all of tomorrow?
As so many before you
Have promised.

Will you protect me today,
And all of tomorrow?
Like too many before you
Have assured.

Or will you leave me today,
Before you are sated tomorrow?
As so many before you
Have done.

And will you leave me today,
Before the battle tomorrow?
Like too many before you
Once did.

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2003 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2003-10-12 10:23 PM


I like this. The tone is plaintive, but almost resigned.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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