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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-10-12 09:11 PM



the pain in my eyes
my heart stood still
the secrect ive been
keeping has finally
become true to you

the sarcastic laugh
when you look at me
the gloating of
seeing the one that is
me.

you say i dont care anymore
but that is not true people
makes mistakes anyone can
vaild that is true.

please forgive me for
i was not thinking
please forgive me
though my heart is
sinking

in all reality it was
you that made me this
way. all in all reality
it was you that turn me
in. you are the one that
dident want me from the
begining.

the sorry i was i am
no more. it was really
you that went out the
door.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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PsychoticBunni
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-10-12 09:13 PM


if i were u i would make him cry the way I'm sure you're hurting right now. but he can't be completely evil if he inspires such beautiful words in you. A bright side to this situation.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-10-12 10:06 PM


thank you.

and i wish i could

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