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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-10-12 07:06 PM



leaves shudder in rain
life's waters bring memories
Autumn brings the sleep

©2003 by icebox

[This message has been edited by icebox (10-12-2003 07:13 PM).]

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-10-12 07:08 PM


MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-10-12 07:09 PM


Yesssss......beautiful!!
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

PsychoticBunni
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Mythical Atlantis
3 posted 2003-10-12 09:00 PM


autumn is definitely a sweet season my friend. you make me visualize it all the more with your words.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-10-13 08:55 PM


Good write, I found this a little too far back...

Nice Senryu, and you don't even look Japanese.

Nan
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5 posted 2003-10-13 09:12 PM


Hunkering down soon
Snowy blankets piling up
For hibernating...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-10-13 09:19 PM


LOL at Ed's reply

yes, reflective autumn is upon us

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