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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-12 05:00 PM


Outpouring


today it rains
and I find you
in the pattern
of the patters


"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-12 05:01 PM


hm, this is kool
Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2003-10-12 07:03 PM


Puttering about?... I like it...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-10-12 07:14 PM


Very nice...so much said in so few words.
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

alisa
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since 2003-08-20
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Florida
4 posted 2003-10-12 08:05 PM


wow....lady, you and your words are amazing...
Saunni
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West Virginia
5 posted 2003-10-12 08:36 PM


I could so picture this! Just awesome, it is!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 2003-10-12 08:53 PM


absolutely gorgeous.  There's just nothing more to say. I loved it.  

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
7 posted 2003-10-14 09:14 AM


I'm doing that right now, and I don't even have rain as an excuse. Jimbo's bad off.



~~J

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-10-14 11:37 AM


Deeply expressive.

Eric

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-10-14 12:17 PM


beautiful red
Robert Frazier
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10 posted 2003-10-14 12:56 PM


...thoughts of you
in geometric flow
the simple beauty of a thing
when looking on it,
slow

Rf

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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2003-10-14 12:57 PM


no better place to see someone... loved this....

Lauren~


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