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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-10-12 01:21 PM



+*+*+*+*+

You are the better half of me,
And I am that of you.
Together we are greater
Than the sum of we two.

Two stars have come together,
On this Earthly plane,
A flaming super nova
Whose light will never wane.

Expansive in awareness,
Our spirits know no end.
We realize ~ we're from the skies,
And Heaven's 'round the bend.

+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-10-12 01:24 PM


Excellente!!

Very good Linda...   Yes, when two come
together and work as one....so much can and
will be accomplished.  


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-12 01:30 PM


Earth Angel
A delight to read.

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-10-12 01:36 PM


And then she made me smile again!  Whoah, this is beautiful, EA!  LOVE IT!

Patricia

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-10-12 01:38 PM


This is tenderly beautiful.So many try to work at it from one side.It takes two to meet in the middle and only then can they accomplish anything.You are so sharing and tender and this is one of the ways it shows.
Crystal

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5 posted 2003-10-12 01:40 PM


was very beautiful!
  love
    shawna

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-10-12 02:39 PM


just just just terrific,,,,

                                                                               

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-10-12 02:43 PM


So gentle...so loving....much enjoyed Linda.

Happy Thanksgiving!

~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-10-12 02:48 PM


This is so sweet, Linda...
And you know that I know how it feels.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-10-12 03:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I have always wondered exactly what is meant by "better half", like your love is superior to you or something, but this had me recognize it so much better, that your loves half completes everything and that's what makes it all"better" reciprocally! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

pandonov
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10 posted 2003-10-12 03:11 PM


you are lucky one
suthern
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11 posted 2003-10-12 05:32 PM


How tender and loving... I like this very much! *S*
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-10-14 01:48 PM


Magnus ~

Ole! Un "Excellente" esta muy excellente! Muchos gracias, senor!

Buscados pequenos,
EA

P.S. Forgive my Spanish! I think "buscados pequenos" means "little kisses"--and not something obscene or insulting or any other  unpleasant thing! lol  

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-10-14 01:49 PM


Dear Tumbleweed ~

~ A delight for a Delight!


EA

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-10-14 01:50 PM


Patricia ~

Smile away, sweet poetess!  Yours is contagious!

Happy autumnal hugs to you, Chelsea, & Macy!

EA

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-10-14 01:51 PM


angelblueyes ~

Thank you for yet another thoughtful and sweet reply, Dear Angel With the Crystal Blue Eyes!

Autumnal blessings,

Linda

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-10-14 01:53 PM


Shawna ~

Hi, Shawna! Welcome to our Passionate Family! Thank you for the "beautiful" reply!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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17 posted 2003-10-14 01:54 PM


Q




EA

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2003-10-14 01:56 PM


Nancy ~

I hope that you and your family had a wonderful Thanksgiving long-weekend! Happy to say that mine and ours was! I am 'thankful' for your warm reply, Enchanting One!

Autumnal blessings,

Linda

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-10-14 01:58 PM


Ethel ~

I know that you know and that you know that I know!

Autumnal blessings!

Linda

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2003-10-14 01:59 PM


Noah ~

Exactomondo!

~ and this too, you shall learn of first 'wing' some day...

Loveya!
Linda

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-10-14 02:01 PM


pandonov ~

Yes! I am indeed fortunate ~ but a love like this was a very long time in the coming!

Happy autumn!

Earth Angel

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22 posted 2003-10-14 02:03 PM


Suthern ~

"tender and loving" ~ thank you!--and so much like yourself.

~ May warm autumnal blessing blow softly your way...

EA

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