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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-10-12 07:47 AM

I Find it Hard

I find it hard to stir the dust
At eighty-one I’m full of rust
Dynamic has lost its play
I wish there was another way.

Now the wile has set my style
Pages from a book of guile
I’ve entered into dream high speed
Where I have planted many seed

Adventure, pleasure, sex and all
Answer to my beck and call
I am a knight with flowing favor
And all the love that I can savor

It’s no wonder that I sleep
Its here a live a ransom’s reap
And here I find desires store
Eternity forever more

So if you find me head on chest
Just let me be I’m out on quest.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-12 07:53 AM

Shhhhhh.....Sy is dreaming
a poem.....

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-10-12 07:55 AM

Chuckling... We should all be so apt in our quests - You dream circles around us all, sweet Sy...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-12 07:58 AM

Sunshine
I was just about to stop by in my dream. LOL

Nan,
And you were my first stop.

Sunshine

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4 posted 2003-10-12 08:36 AM

And you did...you were the reason
for the repost of Keepers...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-12 08:42 AM

Sunshine

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-10-12 09:07 AM

Now the wile has set my style
Pages from a book of guile
I’ve entered into dream high speed
Where I have planted many seed

Adventure, pleasure, sex and all
Answer to my beck and call
I am a knight with flowing favor
And all the love that I can savor

============================

RANDY wrote those verses... LOL

So what youre telling us is...
when Sy is taking a nap...Randy dragon
is charting the dream scheme map...

WOO HOO...works for me.

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold."
"So dawn goes down to day ...
Nothing gold can stay."

~Frost~

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2003-10-12 09:16 AM

It doesn't sound like dynamics have lost their play! The dynamics of your poem were very nice.
Sadelite

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-12 09:24 AM

Morning Sy..
Lovely morning read.
I'm off to prepare our Thanksgiving dinner.
I do have time for you and tea though

I'll pour, okay?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

9 posted 2003-10-12 09:33 AM

Sy, you are not full of rust...your words shine like polished steel..tempered by life's adventures...great write this morning..

believe in what your heart feels...

allamericanjoe
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since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

10 posted 2003-10-12 09:46 AM

Your closing line really brought back memories of my Grandfather, (no offense). You brought a happy smile to my face this morning sir. Thank you.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2003-10-12 09:52 AM

Seymour~
*tiny smiles* this morning at your penning~

Delightful as always~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-12 10:09 AM

JM,
WOO HOO...works for me.
And Randy is noding his head too.
WWRS

Sadelite
Thank you my friend.

Nancy,
Be right over for tea.

scorpio,
A very nice reply, thank you.

allamericanjoe,
Thank you for the read and reply.

Marge
Thank you for the tiny smiles. Hugs

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2003-10-12 05:26 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh.... dream on, sweet friend. *S* Just make sure you share the beautiful words you find along the way. *S*

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2003-10-12 05:28 PM

You got that right about dreaming....Sy,
did you drink something you should not
have?

Nice write from our master poeteer!!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-10-12 06:21 PM

suthern
Thank you love.

Barry,
You are kind my friend.

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

16 posted 2003-10-12 11:46 PM

You pilot a clever pen, my friend! well done!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2003-10-13 07:28 AM

Edder
Thank you my friend.

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