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Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-12 03:07 AM

AS LIFE AND DAYS GO ON

There’s so much that within we see
That contemplation can set free
For now its warmth does comfort me
Although the cloud and grey
Within the mind of truth and dream
In sight of time of now and seen
To what can be and what has been
Decisions made in day

Voices that I so well know
That on and on and on do go
Which help me on when I get low
Within the mind so full
I may listen, or may not
Try again or lose the plot
Realise just how much I’ve got
And call myself the fool

Life does seem a rolling wheel
That rolls upon all that we feel
And we may question what’s the deal
As life as days go on
To realise as we slowly grow
That everything we’ll never know
That days will come and days will go
As life and days go on

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2003-10-12 04:04 AM

Life does seem a rolling wheel
That rolls upon all that we feel
And we may question what’s the deal
As life as days go on

it seems that you and I are on the same page here

good to read you once again. I have missed your words of wisdom.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

2 posted 2003-10-12 07:34 AM

Dear Dixie, nice to see you here again my friend, thanks for the reply, each one means a lot to me. I contemplate maybe too often and not too often on the bright side of life, but I am trying harder and harder to. Hope all is well with you, again thanks and see you soon.

Sincerely
Rick

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-12 08:13 AM

Always, always listen
to the voices, Rick...
never let them go.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-12 08:23 AM

Rick
You have plenty of company. LOL Enjoyed

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

5 posted 2003-10-12 08:32 AM

Dear Sunshine, I shall, thank you for the reply, as always, very much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2003-10-12 08:34 AM

Seymour, great to see you here, thank you for your reply. Always look forward to your company. Take care my friend till again.

Sincerely
Rick

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

7 posted 2003-10-12 09:58 AM

You know I had the very strong mental picture of a big wheel, like one of those you see in scenic pictures, with the pond. As I read, the flow of the words matched the movement of the wheel, and I enjoyed the experience!! Great writing, and I see I shall learn much from you!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

8 posted 2003-10-12 10:00 AM

Finally, I have made it to you. A rolling wheel indeed...but I keep hitting bumps. My PC kicked me out four times before I could get to you!

Beautifully written, Rick. Your rhyme and flow are just lovely.

Patricia

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

9 posted 2003-10-13 08:44 AM

Dear Sunnyone, may we both learn together, thank you so much for your reply, very much appreciated, thank you.

Dear Patricia, great to see you here, thank you for your wonderful reply, great to have good friends here.

To you both, thank you again for your replies, my family at Passions is fantastic.

Sincerely
Rick

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