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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-10-11 02:56 PM


You wake up to cloudy skies
The sun peeks through
Once in awhile
Through the thick clouds

The leaves fall to the ground
And the dew accumilates
On the leaves
From those overcast clouds

Autumn overcast
Can either be depressing
Or beautiful and make you happy
It is up to you

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2003-10-11 03:03 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is lovely imagery, sweet friend, it too varies for me, I guess if there is rain it makes me glad but without it it is just doleful! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
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2 posted 2003-10-11 03:04 PM


Yes, it is, we can choose our own reaction, to that weather or to the inner overcast that can happen on a cloudless day.

I like the way you handled this.



~~J

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