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Edder
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0 posted 10-11-2003 12:45 PM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Edder

On walk with you
down meadow's lane
to serenade
of lark's refrain

Tis true my heart
did skip a beat
when in chance
our eyes did meet

To find myself
in love's embrace
the play of light
upon your face

Halo bound
and tied with lace
shadows dance
to dreamer's pace

Still this heart
my breath deny
on angel's wings
you surely fly


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Startime55
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1 posted 10-11-2003 12:49 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

Your words let me walk with you through tender emotions that felt good in the reading. Well done.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


2 posted 10-11-2003 10:21 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade


On walk with you
down meadow's lane
to serenade
of lark's refrain

I gotta love that verse~

You write so nice Edder,
it's a pleasure strolling through your words.

James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines


3 posted 10-11-2003 10:26 PM       View Profile for James_A_Fraser   Email James_A_Fraser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for James_A_Fraser

'Tis a feeling I know well sir. And one you express to perfection. Thank you for bringing it here.



~~J

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 10-11-2003 10:48 PM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

So tender and sweet..

You write both so well!

Susan
Edder
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5 posted 10-11-2003 11:43 PM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Edder

Startime- once again, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Lori-glad you enjoyed the stroll, so nice to see you here.

James- you are much too kind, I thank you.

Susan- why thank you, dear! you are really too good to me.
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 10-12-2003 05:23 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

on angel's wings
you surely fly

To be thought of so... this is just beautiful. *S*
Edder
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7 posted 10-13-2003 12:28 AM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Edder

Suthern- thank you, your kind words are most appreciated.
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow


8 posted 10-13-2003 10:02 AM       View Profile for KoKo   Email KoKo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KoKo

Wonderful, Eddles.
Nan
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9 posted 10-13-2003 11:39 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is lovely, Edder - I enjoyed muchly...
Tequilia_Sunrise
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10 posted 07-08-2004 01:26 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

wow, i am at loss for words.  very romantic  
Tequilia_Sunrise
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11 posted 07-08-2004 01:39 AM       View Profile for Tequilia_Sunrise   Email Tequilia_Sunrise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tequilia_Sunrise

opps didnt mean to post this again
Kellie_Cantrell
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12 posted 07-08-2004 03:01 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

I like this one. Very nice write
 
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