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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-11 09:51 AM




© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-10-11 09:58 AM


Ah, but at the moment we are enjoying a taste of Indian Summer!
Lovely dear Karilea...just lovely.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2003-10-11 10:00 AM


smiling, as my nose twitched with this one
in memory

of summer

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3 posted 2003-10-11 10:03 AM


Karilea~

Beautiful...

Susan

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then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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4 posted 2003-10-11 10:03 AM


Karilea,
Thank you for the two roses.

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5 posted 2003-10-11 10:13 AM


This says so much...on so many levels.
Beautiful!

Eric

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6 posted 2003-10-11 10:38 AM


    Beauty crinkling.  Very vivid.

Fall is one of my favorite seasons with the contrasting colors of leaves and texture.
(It amazes me how their textures change, especially the leaves going from smooth to crunchy, then to eventually wet, decay.  

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7 posted 2003-10-11 03:37 PM




(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the summer has drifted by but as each season is tie-dyed in my mind, speckles of summer last all throughout the year and indian summer is filled with its leftover splendor! (big hugggsssss) Absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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b/w conscience and insolence
8 posted 2003-10-11 03:41 PM


thx, sunshine for helping me out, and resolving my craziness
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9 posted 2003-10-11 03:47 PM


Karilea, this is so beautiful.
I love roses and I'm saving this one,
because it's from you.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-10-11 04:02 PM


I am always sad to see the last rose of summer.

A beauty of a senryu!

Hugs, Marti

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11 posted 2003-10-11 06:43 PM


loved it
Margherita
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12 posted 2003-10-11 08:08 PM


Beautiful, dear Karilea.
Transformation deeply felt.
Love, Margherita

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13 posted 2003-10-11 08:20 PM


This is lovely, Karilea.  I was thinking aout summer today and how different I am in this new season.  I just can't seem to gather any words in this new season...where is my harvest?  LOL

Beautiful work!

Patricia

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