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Of Space and Place
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Of Space and Place |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Space and Place In a little cut of space I try to find my notch or place A place where I can live and dream That little bit of peaceful seem Although I’ve covered many miles And watched the life of many styles I still prefer my home sweet home The place I live the place I roam Here I find the ties that bind The memories that crowd my mind The faces and the little things All the space my heart would cling This minimal of changing mime This speck of life this epoch time It is this speck that is my core It is my all my evermore So let me dream of butterflies And lay me down where they would lie. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well - Having been a guest in that wonderful "Home Sweet Home" of yours - I can't say I blame you... It's a great Space of Place indeed... Morning Sweet Sy...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You bring this into the center of a being so very carefully, Sy... you make one feel grateful for the littlest of things... thank you..  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, this place is your notch too...you thrive here...well done.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy! What a wonderful write this morning! This one calls for Chai tea...what do you say? How you do this each and every day is beyond me. But, please don't ever stop! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words always have a calmness to them within your rhyme place. Thank you SY,  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I'm hoping you can come soon. Sunshine Thank you love.  scorpio, A very sweet comment, thank you. Nancy, Chai tea would bwe fine. Maureen, love you too. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I know what your problem is, Sy. You were looking for a LITTLE notch. You need more space, that's all. LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun LOL WE only need a little to space to call our own. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I would agree with that, if only SOME of us on this globe would stop trying to steal more space. Hmmm. Loved the wording in this write, and the way it triggered thoughts my mind. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-11-2003 11:07 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
as they say..."Home is where..." you know the rest, don't you? expressed very well. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun Now that's a problem. LOL Barry Thank you and I know the rest. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Here I find the ties that bind The memories that crowd my mind The faces and the little things All the space my heart would cling There really is no place like home, is there, sweet Seymour?  Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel No there isn't my dear. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Thank you, sir...for the reminder |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
AHHH...you took me to this place of yours and my heart was enchanted by the feel and vision of it. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Cerenity'sLine Junior Member
since 2003-08-26
Posts 21 |
Hi Sy, Having no fancy words come to mind, except to say I am truly blown away at the beauty in this piece, Cerenity |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...the classic Seymour I've always loved  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Enough Trading Spaces, how about Gracing Ranges? (big hugggsssssss) May the butterflies come, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Edder Thank you for the read and comment. Cerenity, And I am so happy to see you back. passing shadows I am aware of your shadow. Thank you Noah, My friend. Startime55 Thank you for the like and read. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (10-11-2003 07:52 PM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy ... I believe that the older we get, the more important home and the little things in our lives become. A wonderful piece that I shall keep and treasure. Hugs on this beautiful Fall Saturday. Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, You believe right. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...this place sounds just like the right place for you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I think so, thank you sweet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you vandana. |
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