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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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0 posted 2003-10-11 08:32 AM



Sweet echoes of you
Still haunt me
Piercing my heart
Unexpectedly

A fleeting aroma
Of your blend on a breeze
Still has the power
to tremble my knees

A glimpse of a stranger
With a crooked smile
Squeezes all breath
From my lungs for a while

I destroyed all the letters
Your pictures, the rose
Determined to bury
My memories of us

There is no salve
To ease my pain
When your memory
Strangles my heart again

Time the great healer
I hope will be true
For only time will lessen
The heartbreak of you

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-11 09:24 AM


sad but true...you can destroy all the letters etc..but the memory will still remain

M

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-10-11 11:46 AM


quote:
A fleeting aroma
Of your blend on a breeze
Still has the power
to tremble my knees

yes, I am understanding this one


junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
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3 posted 2003-10-11 05:30 PM


thank you naked thoughts and midnitesun

i am glad you liked this one.
hugs and many thanks from june xxxxx

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