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Open Poetry #29

Holding hands..

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-11 02:18 AM

Carry your words in my hand.
Walking behind you
I stare into your
bright lit hair and
I melt, crumble ..wish
I could get past the confinement
of holding hands,
and you as well..

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

1 posted 2003-10-11 02:25 AM

getting "pass the confinement" you say, glad to see you back, or maybe i haven't been here lately

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-10-11 02:28 AM

to read you is to learn...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-10-11 10:02 AM

"I melt, crumble ..wish"

Meg...I know that...I always say to myself...next time...next time I won't miss him...

Excellent writing! (like you do anything else)

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-11 10:06 AM

Kaoru
Very suggestive, enjoyed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-10-11 10:12 AM

Wow....this is fantastic writing!

Eric

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