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0 posted 2003-10-11 12:54 PM



A Hunter's Moon flares
so bright the crows go stalking
for sightless victims;
I need no moon, no feasting,
and I do not fear the crows.

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-11 01:02 AM


Stunningly clear, as is the moon itself tonight.

Thank you for sharing this.

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2 posted 2003-10-11 01:59 AM


There is strength in this...well done, fellow Ed
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3 posted 2003-10-11 03:33 AM


YES!!! I understand..... YOU are NOT a victim..... Well Written

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4 posted 2003-10-11 08:26 AM


Never sightless... never victim... Crow has shiny feathers but not much sense thinking otherwise. *G* I smell blackbird pie? LOL

I like this stong piece very much, sir... well written!

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5 posted 2003-10-11 08:32 AM


Interesting visage... As an October full moon loomed over my beach last night...
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6 posted 2003-10-11 09:29 AM


Ed...You are a wonder!
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7 posted 2003-10-11 09:38 AM


It was a beautiful moon...I felt its pull

*s
M

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8 posted 2003-10-11 10:14 AM


Man...I picked a good day to pop in.
I would hate to miss this one!

Eric

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9 posted 2003-10-11 03:06 PM


Slept on this and decided it belonged in the library. ~click~
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10 posted 2003-10-11 03:21 PM




(smiles) Oh Ed, this is wonderful, sweet friend, leave this moon to the crows for we all perceive the moon differently! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ed, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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