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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-11 12:12 PM


leaking
through
i
amass
between
two
thoughts


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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-10-11 12:21 PM


Well isn't that part of the thought process? Scratching head, thinking real hard.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

pandonov
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2 posted 2003-10-11 12:23 PM


hm you might be right here... don't spoil it i had something else in mind
Magicmystery
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3 posted 2003-10-11 12:32 PM


plugs, .... Yeah, that's the answer!


pandonov
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4 posted 2003-10-11 01:47 AM


plugs you say, and the material is??
Kaoru
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5 posted 2003-10-11 02:10 AM


Ugh, I love your stuff..it's a bad addiction now.

Thanks

Magicmystery
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6 posted 2003-10-11 03:24 AM


I personally wear earplugs at night.... helps my brains from leaking out onto my pillow (I hate sleeping on a wet pillow)
No really though, the first thing that popped into my mind as I read your poem was the loss of memory (literal the chemestry that stores memory in the brain "a mass" or "amass" ... it was a great pun on words... between two thoughts Or more to the point, hearing two thoughts....in your mind... which brings me back to my point on wearing earplugs when I sleep..... that's when I do my best thinking.

Sherry

Margherita
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7 posted 2003-10-11 05:08 AM


Indeed the greatest treasures can be found BETWEEN thoughts .... in the emptiness creation manifests.
Great!
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-10-11 06:57 AM



Now, this is GOOD!

Nan
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9 posted 2003-10-11 08:12 AM


It deserves one...
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