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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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buries with a smile this tired effigy the beauteous requiem of melancholy |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sighs* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
awesome, enjoy reading your stuff |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the beauteous requiem of melancholy yea it is in its way as it comes and then again goes just as mysteriously |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Kris and hugs Pandonov thank you and likewise Mish isn't it though.. a whisper in the wind thanks |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx aenimal, for clarifying the haiku mistery for me. I really appreciate it. didn't have too much clue what haiku is but 3 lines and 5-7-5(i thought i can bend the second)  [This message has been edited by pandonov (10-10-2003 11:57 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...brilliant...I love how your work is expanding. your free spirit has always been evident, but your writing has expanded. We all want that! ~K~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
No problem pandonov I needed it clarified too. They're deceptive aren't they, seemingly short and simple but difficult to write Thanks Kahlil you're always kind and supportive, much appreciated |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Beautiful! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Raph. Love it Bello  fate is not just |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
indeed they are, and thats the beauty of it... thx |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ahhhhhhhhhhh |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*heart heart heart* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
beautiful writing Raph good to see you back *smile* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-11-2003 05:07 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, difficult Raph...yet, when done with just the right touch....so powerful... Well expressed, I must say. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I will never understand how they do it...but I'm so glad they do.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Raphael, I am happy to see you continuing to expand your poetic beauty, sweet friend, this is a true masterpiece of brevity, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I forgot to reply  stupid liz, bad liz  What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Me too. Grin. Truly Raph, a fine bit of lace this is... looks good in the scrapbook. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Icebox means alot to me Grazie Bellisima Pandonov very true yes Thanks Red grins Thanks Megs lol Thanks Sue nice to be back thank you kindly Barry Me too Ed me too Thanks Noah a kinder soul we'll never see No liz good..raph bad..grunt..scratches self..mmm fire Thanks K and for the chat today |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A little gem. .... and positive! Abbracci. Margherita |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Ahh, melancholy... isn't it something beautiful? I've tried explaining to my going muse that what I find beautiful in her is her ability to concretize the whole of human emotion in a single frown, and but two tearful eyes. Then she asked me what the hell I was talking about. I think you've done a much better job... Great work, Raph. I'm glad that you're working on making your poetry more "poetry" these days. I once was not a fan of you, but I am beginning to be. Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You are so good, Raph. Patricia |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, Raph, if I were to ever request someone to take a photo of me when I'm writing, I would ask that it be you. I think you would find just the right shot of me when I disappear into my words... I think you have that insight... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
exquisite... regards sudhir |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Margherita positivity? How did that slip thgouh..grins Abbracci Thanks Bri appreciate the vote of confidence and thanks for helping me get back on track i was too busy rebelling against meter and rhyme to notice the neglect of metaphor and allegory Thank you kindly Patricia Thanks Karilea that's sweet and as luck would haveit I have some photgraphy experience grin Thanks Sudhir appreciate you stopping by |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
a silent song of misery.  |
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