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*Stubby*
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0 posted 2003-10-10 10:46 PM



Your wearing yourself out
and wearing yourself thin
if you dont slow down soon
all you'll be is a tearin the wind


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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-10-10 10:52 PM


Wow...good advice.

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-10 10:56 PM


Yes very good advice m'friend.
Some people just don't know when to slow down
Good write ...something we should all think about, seriously.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-10 11:04 PM






(smiles) Oh Stubby, this is beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your friend and I hope this advice serves this one well! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have a most giving heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stubby, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-10-11 08:49 AM


Good advice my friend...I'm glad to see you back here..

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-10-11 10:25 AM



Ok, I hear you, and will put on the brakes...

soon.  [That's one of Ron's soons, of course...]

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-10-11 05:51 PM


Stubby~

A poignant read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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