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suthern
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0 posted 2003-10-10 10:44 PM


I drink in the sight of your home
The lawn you mow
The landscape you tend
This place on earth
That's better because of you
I know those caring hands

I touch my heart
You live here, too.

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-10-10 10:46 PM


Beautiful...perfectly beautiful!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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2 posted 2003-10-10 10:51 PM


To be so lucky...
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3 posted 2003-10-10 10:51 PM


Wouldn't it be wonderful if we all felt this way, or at least at some time in our lives felt so complete...lovely write my friend!

jwesley

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4 posted 2003-10-10 11:07 PM






(smiles) Oh Suthern, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you truly make any space feel like home and make a garden out of it for your heart holds true a botanic wisdom! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

suthern
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5 posted 2003-10-11 08:39 AM


Enchantress: Thank you so much, kind lady... I'm so glad you like! *S*

Edder: What a lovely response... I hope he thinks so! *S* Thank you very much! *S*

jwesley: Complete... yes... that's the word. *S* And it IS wonderful to feel so! *S* Thank you very much! *S*

M'toe: You sweetie... botanic wisdom... that's a great phrase! *S* I was just lucky enough to find love blooming... tending it is a privilege. *S* Thank you very much! *S*

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6 posted 2003-10-11 12:19 PM


Suthern, this is so pretty...
and so sweet....just like you are.
Sorry that I almost missed it. here
it goes back for another round.  
Hugs, sweet lady  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-10-11 12:23 PM


Yes,  I agree with JW...I think the word
complete is very appropriate for the feel
of this poem.  Nicely written Suthern.

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8 posted 2003-10-11 12:30 PM


suthern
My sweet, if it willl be, it will be.

James_A_Fraser
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9 posted 2003-10-11 03:02 PM


A sense of peace in this...you can just feel the contentment in that place. Well done Suthern Lady -- this one's a keeper!



~~J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (10-11-2003 06:31 PM).]

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10 posted 2003-10-11 03:59 PM


SweetSuthernLady~
Do you have ANY idea how much I like this one ?

I hope so ... for it is so tenderly touching from your heart to another~
PERFECT sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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11 posted 2003-10-11 06:32 PM


A gentle bump for Laura's gentle portrait. Nice work, m'lady. I like this very much.

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Martie
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12 posted 2003-10-11 06:50 PM


Suthern...Such a loving touch you have.  IWIHWT
BluesSerenade
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13 posted 2003-10-12 12:50 PM


suthern~   Your heart is so full!
Just beautiful, you~

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-10-12 01:03 PM


beautiful
Nan
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15 posted 2003-10-12 03:12 PM


Within your heart is surely a very safe and comfy place... Very nice, Ruth...
suthern
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16 posted 2003-10-12 05:15 PM


garysgirl: You're the sweet one, dear lady... I do thank you! *S*

Magnus! Thank you so much! *S*

Seymour: And it is.. regardless. *S* Thank you, my friend. *S*

Jamie: Which place would that be? *bratty grin* Thank you, sir... you truly honor me. *S*

Marge: No, ma'am... *S* But I'm sure glad you do! *S* Thank you!

Ratleader: Thank you, my frienbd... I appreciate the bump and your words... so very much. *S*

Martie: To see those letters in response to something I've written humbles me... I thank you.

Blues: Are you saying I'm full of it? LOL (sorry... couldn't resist *G*) Thank you, sweet lady... so much!

PS: Thank you very much!

Nan: I sure hope it is. *S* Thank you very much!


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