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Lotus Breeze
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0 posted 2003-10-10 10:09 PM


When meeting anywhere
Surroundings matter nothing
As long as you there
Eden garden we standing
Let be first time share
Then all big world will be gone
With you ever I belong


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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-10-10 10:34 PM


Very sweet!! Nice to read!

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Snowflake From Hell
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2 posted 2003-10-10 10:37 PM


i have to agree it was nice to read

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-10-18 12:51 PM


Enjoyed...James
EvocativeVerse2
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4 posted 2003-10-18 01:35 AM


Ahh this is sweet, Why doesn't someone write things like this to me! Loved it.

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passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-10-18 04:16 AM


a beautiful love poem
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-10-18 06:51 AM


Very sweet! I enjoyed.

Susan

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-10-18 07:15 AM


Let be first time share
Then all big world will be gone

~*~

Lotus Breeze, this is lovely;
I know the moment when the world seems
to disappear, and there are just the two.

Please, continue sharing!

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-10-18 05:52 PM


LotusBreeze~
Your poetic voice is soft and gentle~
You are a joy to read~

And your photograph is as lovely as your writing~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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