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Open Poetry #29

letter in a bottle

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2003-10-10 08:30 PM

Letter in a bottle

if i turned spit to tears could it make up for some of the years?
Not all mind you, for i wouldnt hope for a miracle to that extent,
But maybe, just maybe, your iron-like can be bent,
Then we will say all of the things the past truly meant.

if i unfurled heavens into this hell of a world,
Would you realize the screams of pain were for you,
they would tell of the purification that i pursue,
change will cost it all, i can tell from my point of view.

All these things and more, just to establish a rapport.
I'm swallowing my fresh lumps rising in my throat,
trying to believe the things i have momentarily wrote,
letting these things go, i set this letter in a bottle afloat.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-10-10 09:06 PM

Nice write, an inspiring topic...one which
I might delve into...thanx for the share.

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