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Lizzy
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since 2003-10-10
Posts 3
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2003-10-10 06:20 PM



Do you see her dancing
right there, out there
just chancing

She moves with a secret beat
Only her ears can here
Walking up the street

Flowing hair
moving with steps
not one care

The sidewalk ends
A red light for her
A look to me she sends

A smile graces her face
The walk signal begins
Of her I want to taste

She walks to me
At least I think
In my bed I see

Black eyes of steel
Lips full and soft
Her I can now feel

Don’t walk away
I’m enthraled
Please stay

She’s gone
nothing I can do
except be withdrawn


© Copyright 2003 Lizzy Kiedis - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

1 posted 2003-10-11 12:20 PM





Hi Lizzy, it’s nice to meet you!

I think we all know this feeling.
When we see or meet someone who simply
captivates us, in an enticing and
mysterious kind of way...

Your mind starts to wonder
what they are really like deep inside
past their external appeal...

Only to never see them again...

Poof!

Oh!... where was I???

lol


This was nice Lizzy!

Welcome To Passions!

I hope you enjoy it here!

Richy


n2dmystic
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
2 posted 2003-10-11 02:58 AM


WELCOME!!! to Passions Lizzy.  a nice hot little read. vivid. I like.  Grow some poems in Passions garden.  

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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