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Open Poetry #29

A cell of my own making

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

0 posted 2003-10-10 05:43 PM

Left out,
Locked out,
Chained to the wall,
Apart from the rest,
But is it my fault?

I sit in the shadows,
My shackles clank softly,
Darkness my friend,
Myself for company,
I wonder why,

Lost in my mind,
I'm starting to slip,
The world turns around me,
Then I hear a click...

... I've let go.

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

1 posted 2003-10-10 05:58 PM

Well, I'm back from quite a hiatus. This is just a little something I cooked up. See what you think of it.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

bbent
Senior Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 521
Alaska

2 posted 2003-10-12 03:30 AM

I liked it... left me with something to think about.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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