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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-10 04:33 PM


I see you
And my little voice says
Your no good for me
And I walk away

I think about you
And my little voice says
Your not worthy
For me to think about
So I don't

I dream about you
And my little voice says
You hurt me too much
So now it is time
For me to move on

The little voice
Helped me survive
The pain you put me through

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-10 04:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Three cheers for your little voice, hip-hip hooray! (big hugggsssssss) Don't worry, that little voice is telling you the right thing to do and will let you know when someone deserving is there to forever greet you with warmth, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-10-10 05:02 PM


wow. u must have a unique voice. because most people's voices tell them to throw themselves at people's feet and beg to be taken back. or at least mine does. :-D but all jokes aside ur voice in the poetry is very clear.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
3 posted 2003-10-10 11:07 PM


My little voice leads me to adventure.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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