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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-10 02:52 PM


Doni Tondo

Designating the notion wide range of prize
Expanded to include meditation’s mind
Designing this pilgrimage, purely visible and spent
Singles out all praise dripping realms originally meant
Plethora so accessible and sweetly mirrored
In this summit of poetic circles
Lies a vernacular tradition with generic formations
Extraordinary coherent mortars written in the sky
Clearly painted images of our faithful family’s mind
Wouldn’t it be we that are pages of reproduction?
Our images of history are thumbnails so gingerly cushioned
There is separation of light and dark
Creation of plants, moon and sun
Of sea monsters, and the parishioners of water
First worldly gentleman and woman
in all records of Renaissance Art on the walls,
waxed by candles floating to yesterday’s call
Locating a source of fire in music and show business
Clearly flammable, soundproofing all souls countless
Inspectors and performers, making all earth whole
Memoirs of ambition, thoughts of passionate sons
Poor old fires, which were beautiful once
From ever fountain raises metaphorical glows
Painted for all to see, clearly exposed
Like a Play in a stadium with shooting sparks to the sky
All within a night-club memorial lamenting 70 feet high


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-10 03:00 PM


I enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-10-10 03:11 PM


(smiling) sometimes...my mind simply refuses to wrap itself around all you are saying..so I have to visit more than once..and work my way through the images and references... but you always weave a complex set of images around a point that illuminates aspects worth the peer...


Magnus
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3 posted 2003-10-10 04:28 PM


Ditto and in triplicate to what Ron said...
If only I had that vocabulary.....Imagine
what I could do...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-10-10 04:47 PM


LeeJ
I was about to say the same thing. LOL
Enjoyed

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