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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-10-10 01:32 PM


10 years from now
When we are married
With children
Are you gonna be there

20 years down the road
When the children
Start moving out
Or getting married
Are you gonna be there

30 years in the future
Will you be by my side
When we see our first
Grandchild be born
Are you gonna be there

40 years down the road
When I start getting
Old and feeble
And start to decline in health
Are you gonna be there

50 years from now
When I am on my deathbed
And I pass away
Are you gonna be there

Are you gonna be there
Through all lifes ups and downs

Are you gonna be there

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-10 01:55 PM


Julie, that was a very moving piece of writing. There are no guarantees in life, but keep your heart--and eyes--open and enjoy the ride!

Loving hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-10-10 02:23 PM


That's the goal, oh yes! Well said, young lady....though ten years if there are only ten, or five, or one, can mean as much. The key is that whatever the world allows, will be taken together.

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3 posted 2003-10-10 04:57 PM


This is excellent, Julie... and you deserve a yes to all those questions. *S*
PsychoticBunni
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4 posted 2003-10-10 05:09 PM


if u want that special someone to be there all those years from now it had better be a bobble head doll, cuz no man will ever stay that long. just kidding. i hope u find that special guy and share all of your wonderful work with him too!

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

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5 posted 2003-10-10 08:54 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I wish this happiness for you ever so much, sweet friend, I certainly hope this is the case as He has a plan for us all and even if this particular one doesn't work out, it will elsewhere! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ThunderMage
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6 posted 2003-10-10 11:09 PM


Awesome poem as usual.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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