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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-10 12:26 PM


I want the pain
To go away
I want tne good things
To come back to me

I want to remember
The best things in life
And not all
The bad things

Let the rain fall
And cleanse me
Of all this hurt
And replace it with love

Cold hands means a warm heart

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-10 12:39 PM


Yes I wish for you all this.

May the rain come and wash away
All the pain in your hearts way
May it flow out of your soul
So that happiness may take control
May the hurt be gone with a wave of my wand
And nothing but love will flourish strong
For you see you are tender and sweet
Bathed in love from your head to you feet
The angels will help to let you out
And I'm here if there's ever any doubt
That you are a lady full of life and love
And you deserve all that I've mentioned of

Crystal

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-10-10 03:57 PM


This one is simple, and it tugs the heartstrings. This is well-written, and deserves more attention than it has gotten.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
3 posted 2003-10-10 04:36 PM


yea i know alot of us that need to be cleansed. i think of it almost every time i come in from football w/ my brothers. but all jokes aside i think everyone can relate to this.

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-10 04:48 PM






(big hugggsssssss) I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, know that through every storm, a lighthouse is beaming, and is signaling you! (sigh) Know we're all here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
5 posted 2003-10-10 11:04 PM


I know the feeling.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2003-10-10 11:07 PM


I wish it all upon you, my friend, immediately upon your awakening in the morning, or in your dreams tonight...at least, as I don't think my geni powers have been functioning well as of late.

enjoyed...

jwesley

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-10-10 11:12 PM


I like this. It's so true. We all deserve good things in life!!!

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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