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The Confines Of Mind |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Keep prisoner I did not Fed you the breeze in every moment of aired grief upon the white skinned pages Walked with you imaginary side by side crunching autumn leaves meeting, greeting without you Mentioning you frequently grimace as I did knowing you taboo outside confines of my mind I let you anyway spill from and roam Present in the rustle of leaves the hum of traffic and tap of impatient nail I will tell the moving days each and every one that I loved you. [This message has been edited by gemjop (10-10-2003 12:31 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Lady you awe me eveytime.You've got that special something that just speaks to me when I read you.Maybe it's what you say has or is a reality for me.Anyways thank you for all that you write.It brings more than you'll ever know.  Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma, the last verse...just wow! the whole write...awesome! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mentioning you frequently grimace as I did knowing you taboo outside confines of my mind Mmmm hmmmm, I understand this all to well. Nice going gemma~ |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Lord that was good! The best thing I have read thisa morning. Well done indeed. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemma~ Nicely done woman!! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou so much, all your replies mean much to me y know? Ethel inspired this one, with her poems, she made me think this morning, how important it is to tell the people you love that you do. I suppose this doesnt reflect that, but ah, this is what came out. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, your poetry always has such an element of soul to it that personifies it with utmost beauty and certification! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
adore this Gem |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love what you do with words. Present in the rustle of leaves the hum of traffic and tap of impatient nail I will tell the moving days each and every one that I loved you. Yes! Maree  fate is not just |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem - Always amazingly well written..and emotionally captivating.. I love your work. |
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