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Ringo
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0 posted 2003-10-10 11:38 AM



Me again...
My 10 y/o neice also wants to be just like her Uncle Bradly and write poetry. Here is her entry.


MEAT SHOP

I went to a meat factory
And slipped on a piece
Of old mouldy meat
It was smelly and fuzzy
Just like Nanny's feet
I landed on my head
Why am I in bed?
Where is my friend
Even I think I'm in heaven
All because of that piece of mouldy meat

Here is her cousin's (my daughter) work) /pip/Forum82/HTML/001190.html

[This message has been edited by Ringo (10-10-2003 11:49 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-10 11:45 AM


Hardee har har! What a hoot! What a sense of humor--and imagination! I guess the nut didn't fall too far from family tree!--and that's a good thing!

to you both!
Earth Angel

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2 posted 2003-10-10 11:50 AM


Makes me think of the slapstick physical comedy...cute one. Love the 2 girls imaginations.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-10-10 12:18 PM


Brad?

*smile*
hmmm wonder where they get it from?

How very cool - what is her/their names
and why dont they post more?
Made me smile
thank you

(I tried the second link,
it didnt work for me)  

Girls?
keep writing, keep thinking
(not too hard)
and never ever lose your imagination
xxoo

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-10-10 12:24 PM


Imagination's a great thing to have and it looks like they both have plenty of that.It'll take them far in life.
Crystal

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5 posted 2003-10-10 03:17 PM


I can see the joy of writing runs in the family!
We always love having young writers join us!
Please see if your niece would like to sign up as a member Brad.
Nicely done!

~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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6 posted 2003-10-10 04:41 PM






(giggles in delight) Hehehe, both her and her cousin sure have had bad luck with lunch meat this week, hehehe! (smiles) Awwwwwww, both of these little girls have such wonderufl talent and I sure hope they post until their own screen-names here so we can see more of their beautiful heartfelt poems, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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7 posted 2003-10-10 05:09 PM


Well done and very humourous...another pip convert..

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2003-10-10 05:18 PM


and i am yet another avid fan of ur family's work. lol.

Meg

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9 posted 2003-10-10 05:19 PM



So when are you going to attempt a tri-et?  I think you all should get together....
and treat us to something hallowe'eny...

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10 posted 2003-10-11 12:39 PM


As I said in the other one, thanks to all... and Sunshine... I'm just gonna have to work on that Haloween ti-post... It would definately be interesting.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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11 posted 2003-10-11 06:18 AM




Man Bradly, don’t you guys have a zoo in town
or at least a park or something?!?

I mean smelly meat, like Nanny’s feet... Gawd!

lol

Has your poor Nanny read these yet???

What’s next week the Cheez Whiz Warehouse!

Oh I get it, these places save you the cost of buying an
actual lunch...


This reminds me of a piece of Baloney I found way
back in the refrigerator the other day...

It had been there so long, it looked like a hairpiece,
for a Ch Ch Ch Chia Pet!

Man, these kids are my all time favorites!

This is really precious Bradly!

Richy

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