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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-10-10 11:18 AM



Sitting in silent meditation.

Incense of jasmine attempts to fill
the empty air spaces between us.

I sense your reluctance
to reach out and grasp
the vital essence of me.

Or is it my own
reflection I see?


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-10 11:29 AM


Kacy I doubt it is your reflection hon,
but I did enjoy the way you used the entire poem to arrive at the question...
very well done gal.

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2 posted 2003-10-10 11:30 AM


Wonderful Kacy!!
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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3 posted 2003-10-10 11:32 AM


Donna, smiling at you for your constant tenderness.
Nancy, thanks dear lady, so happy to have a visit from you.

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4 posted 2003-10-10 11:51 AM


Midnitesun
Good question, enjoyed.

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5 posted 2003-10-10 11:57 AM


Thanks for your time and reply, Sy.
Now, if only I had the answer to this riddle, perhaps the time spent on my derriere would be less?

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6 posted 2003-10-10 12:54 PM


Excellent! Enjoyed this little question very much! Very well done. Can't wait to see more.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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7 posted 2003-10-10 12:54 PM


The answer will come in time, don't force it.You are an talented poetess.
Crystal

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8 posted 2003-10-10 04:44 PM


Kacy,  you do have a way with words that
leaves one in thought...  Nicely done.

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9 posted 2003-10-10 08:41 PM




(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this is deeply contemplative and I think setting really brings the balance into focus! (big hugggsssssss) May the fortune always be that you seek, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-10-2003 08:42 PM).]

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