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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-10-10 09:53 AM


Over waking eyes I lean and happily follow
Her waves twinkling from a sun-swept land
Ohhhh The sea, the sea,,,,,
Murmuring pools languid, spreading her friendly tent
From pristine ancient rainbows, bubble depth
Smiling upon our lives, what power, what soul, what sources
Ventures can be learned
What love, be her forceful knights?
Like listening ears of amethyst in summer
I follow her dreamy notes, streaming across the sky
Earth wind and fire….romancing the souls of man
Summer meadows curve, drenching beauty’s wine
I hear a chanting breath, born of Venus sighs
Youthful hope become hallowed beams of Divas
Passionate fresh young arms, grazing time’s abyss
Oh that all has struck the chords, like roots of motherhood
I am so diminutive, yet my soul is an immortal sway of joy
In the many hours of believable beauty, a southern wind shall blow
Zeus colors every echo, every season’s prayer
Every breath that turns to voice, and floods our needed care
Embrace the electrodes of heaven, love perpetually trombones
Deliberate ambiance singing strength of fire in our journey’s tones
Flaming wings of life, given silver hope insured
Shhhhsh, child close your eyes and calmly rest assured
That light above the fearful roads, are made of thoughtful steel
Turning spellbound silken stores of whitened dreams surreal
For from the dark and silent grave comes spirit’s far and wide
Ever present in this world, unseen by mankind’s eyes


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-10-10 09:59 AM


LeeJ
"For from the dark and silent grave comes spirit’s far and wide
Ever present in this world, unseen by mankind’s eyes

You are a delight.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-10-10 11:02 AM


G'Morning Lady Poetess

enjoyed your terrific write n read,,,

Have a great weekend,,,,

                                                                        

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-10-10 11:11 AM


"For from the dark and silent grave comes spirit’s far and wide
Ever present in this world, unseen by mankind’s eyes"

~ but you are one who sees...

Extraordinary write!

Happy autumn!
Linda

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-10-11 10:10 PM


Murmuring pools languid, spreading her friendly tent
From pristine ancient rainbows, bubble depth
Smiling upon our lives, what power, what soul, what sources
Ventures can be learned
What love, be her forceful knights?

What a lovely poem and picture you've drawn with your words.

Thank you LeeJ~ I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.  



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