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A simple smile

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Edder
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0 posted 10-10-2003 09:36 AM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Edder

Lie in peaceful slumber
drifting off to dream
ride a shooting star
bask in Luna's beam
know I'm thinking of you
across the lonely miles
a weary soul restored
by a simple *smile*
© Copyright 2003 Edder - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-10-2003 09:38 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful!
This piece flows so gently down the page.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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nicely done Edder... nicely done indeed!
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3 posted 10-10-2003 10:33 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

When it comes from the right person, that simple smile carries magical remedies for all that ails you. *S*
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Nancy- thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed.

Ron- a privilege to have you here, sir. Thank you for reading.

Suthern- indeed it does, and i'm quite sure she doesn't know how much I needed it at the time.
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Beautiful!
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Love the peaceful easy feeling in this.

Ya made me smile Edder~  
Says so much in so few words.
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love this write, m'friend
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(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautifully magical, sweet friend, a smile is conagious and somehow I know God sent an angel to send your loves smile to you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Edder
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9 posted 10-11-2003 12:54 AM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Edder

Endless- Thank you much!

Lori- If that's the case...mission accomplished

Kacy- Thanks for stopping by, glad you enjoyed

Noah- You don't know how right you are!
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Enjoyed this,  yes,  a smile can mean so
very much...with so little effort...and
the rewards are so great...to both.
Startime55
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How beautifully you tell of the way a simple smile can make the heart sing. I really like the way this poem brought a smile to my face. Thank you.
Edder
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Barry- Thank you, sir. Twas a simple act of kindness at just the right moment.

Startime- Thank you. I'm more than happy to share the feeling...

[This message has been edited by Edder (10-11-2003 12:52 PM).]

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Edder
Well done enjoyed.
James_A_Fraser
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Isn't it good to know that sometimes a smile is all it takes.....



~~J

Susan Caldwell
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This is so sweet...sometimes we get so caught up in wanting the big picture we forget to inhale the small stuff...



Susan
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Seymour- Thank you for the read, I'm honored.

James- amazing how such a small gesture can turn your whole day around, isn't it? Thanks for your time.

Susan- as a friend recently reminded me, it's the little things that count. thanks dahhlin'
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Lovely, Eddles. Absolutely lovely
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is this the one you refered to, ya know "the sappy stuff"...
its gorgeous, and sweet, and oozing with charm  
come on, how many do i need to reply to in order to get you to put a new one up?
come on buddy  
Susan Caldwell
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LMAO Don't you know by now Ed is a HUGE word tease?  

love ya Ed!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

 
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