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Open Poetry #29

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El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-10-10 08:40 AM

I dabbled in some free verse while on vacation. Tell me honestly what you think about this one...

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Nuclear fusion
Causing dynamic reactions,
Creating massive waves
Of energy;
At the surface
Taking the form
Of light,
Spreading color
And warmth
Throughout the galaxy—
A smile.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-10-10 08:45 AM

El_C ~

...ad infinitum...

Love & Eternal Light,
EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-10-10 01:58 PM

Benjamin~
I like your 'dabbling' muchly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-10 01:59 PM

Honestly? You should 'dabble' more often!

Excellent!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-10-10 03:37 PM

I enjoyed this one. Nice ending.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-10-10 04:45 PM

(smiles) Oh Benjamin, this is absolutely delightful, sweet friend, smiles are so contagious and you sure fused me with one! (big hugggsssssss) I hope you had a lovely vacation, sweet friend, it seemed you had a beautiful time since you wrote this smile during it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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