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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-10 07:05 AM




That deserted feel…
~ Dust blowing across the sands ~
…Bereft of lexis

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-10 07:51 AM



NO!!!!!!!!!
I won't stand for it!!  
Morning Sunshine...

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2 posted 2003-10-10 07:56 AM



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3 posted 2003-10-10 08:40 AM


Morning lady....

gone? no.. simply in repose perhaps...

like this... and the strength as well as the emotions in so few words... this..this is real...

El_Campeador
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4 posted 2003-10-10 08:42 AM


This is a beautiful painting with words, Karilea. Thank you...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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5 posted 2003-10-10 08:44 AM


hugsss lady sun...   

Lauren~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

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6 posted 2003-10-10 09:01 AM


Lovely....very nicely done...love this!
~Hugs YOU!~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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7 posted 2003-10-10 09:06 AM


gone...
I think not lovely lady!  The sun will always withstand the deserts sands....
no matter how bad the sandstorms!!
HUGS YOU

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8 posted 2003-10-10 11:03 AM


good,

                                                                        

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9 posted 2003-10-10 04:22 PM


The only way you,  or anything that is your
own will go anywhere...is over our dead and
cooling bodies....

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10 posted 2003-10-10 09:57 PM




(sigh) .....and even when the desert winds keep blowing and the heat is unbearable and phlegmatic, nothing ever is abandoned and dust to dust, ashes to ashes, he spirits are always there! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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