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Open Poetry #29

it came from somewhere

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-10 03:17 AM

you've seen them naked
they rely on your gravity
to exist

[This message has been edited by pandonov (10-10-2003 03:21 AM).]

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-10-10 03:30 AM

Hmmm can get several different things from this.will be interesting to see with the others come up with.

Crystal

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-10-10 12:11 PM

thx angel

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-10-10 10:40 PM

Fantastic writing I look forward to more work.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-10-10 10:49 PM

hmm, honest thoughts can do that

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2003-10-10 11:01 PM

thx all, I really appreciate it

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2003-10-11 12:43 PM

I've got it!!!! most people would think that you are talking about Earth, but the sun is a more appropriate reply to this riddle. If it wasn't for the sun's gravity, we would be an orphan, in the deep freeze of space. Sol has seen us naked thru our existance and especially for a really good tan minus the lines.

I like these riddle kind of poems.

Sherry

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2003-10-11 12:47 PM

hm... sun i don't know about that, but...

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