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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-10-10 01:50 AM

After The Pause

"love,"
I
answer

then
your careful

pause
and

"...why?"

never
a word
so

bleak

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (10-10-2003 09:19 AM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-10-10 03:32 AM

This one made me think.Well penned.
Crystal

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-10 09:32 AM

Yes...that word..."why"

Love a piece that makes me stop and ponder
as this one has...

Enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-10-10 09:36 AM

James ~

That hurts...

Loving hugs,
Linda

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-10 09:39 AM

oh...this.. this in a few words does do so much to the reader...

well done sir... indeed!!!!

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2003-10-10 10:31 AM

Jamie...Something about this feels so sad.

Martie

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California

6 posted 2003-10-10 10:37 AM

Jamie...Something about this feels so sad.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-10-10 11:02 AM

I love it when someone is able to say so much... even if it takes volumes to do so. When a lifetime of interactions is condensed into so few words, my admiration increases exponentially. *S*

What was the initial question? Why should she hesitate, ask for more? Our own life experiences fill in the blanks... and we share the feel of bleak.

This is excellent!

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2003-10-10 11:07 AM

very wise Love really has no definite meaning or does it?

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-10-10 11:45 AM

Silence is not always golden is it?
....has a way of speaking for itself.

You did good James_A_

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-10 11:53 AM

James,
Well done, enjoyed.

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