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allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

0 posted 2003-10-10 12:16 PM

You'll see her here,
From time to time.
In the written word,
My verse, my rhyme.

I speak of her,
More oft' than not.
My heart you see,
On a string she's got.

I'll describe her to you,
So that you'll unerstand.
The beauty she posseses,
It's where my love began.

Beautiful brown eyes,
Like those of a dove.
It was her eyes that bespelled me,
And captured my love.

Her hair is like silk,
A chocolate cascade.
From it her sweet smell,
my senses invade.

Her lips thin and soft,
Some of heaven is there,
For when they touch mine
I know no dispair.

Her hands oh so gentle,
nails the colour of wine.
my problems don't matter,
when our two entwine.

No more can I tell you,
No more can you see.
For the rest of her visage,
I keep only for me.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-10-10 12:37 PM

She sounds beautiful, just like your poetry!
Thanks for sharing~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-10-10 12:37 PM

Smiling at this love poem. Hope she reads it.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2003-10-10 12:50 PM

this was so sweet and loving over every line
I can relate , someone special is usually threaded through mine

Hope

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-10-10 12:52 PM

I'm glad you have that someone special in your life.May she see this wondrous write and know ho seh touches your heart and soul.

Crystal

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-10-10 12:59 PM

Oh, that was so lovely--and I loved the precious ending!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

SongVixen
Junior Member

since 2003-07-06

Posts 43
England

6 posted 2003-10-10 01:44 AM

Lucky lady!
~ hope she inspires more of your poetry~
~*NATASHA*~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-10 09:35 AM

How beautiful this is...
and what a lucky lady to have inspired
such a wonderful piece!

Well done poet sir.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-10-10 09:46 AM

But...you have given
us enough
for us to acknowledge
how blessed
you are.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-10-10 09:51 AM

allamericanjoe
Lovely thoughts, lovely write, lovely read.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2003-10-10 09:56 AM

What a beautiful 'peace' you have....so inspiring....

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

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