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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-10-09 09:38 PM



Everyone who loves me, hates me.
And everyone who hates me, kills.
So if you want to know what life is,
Its suicide without the pills.

Every breath I take is painful,
With all my muscles aching still,
And if you want to know what life is,
Its suicide without the thrill.

Now I’m not saying that it’s over
But I’m saying, if you will,
That to live this life is torture
Its suicide without the pills.


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (10-10-2003 03:07 AM).]

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Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2003-10-09 10:03 PM


very true how it seems that way...great write

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies.   Dimmu Borgir

Shawna Fitzgerald
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2 posted 2003-10-09 10:12 PM


hey,
i know how it feals i once tryed to kill myself but then i thought about how my friends would react  so i stoped the bleeding
if you ever need to talk to someone to talk to i'm always here for you and others if you would like to contact me my e-mail is
candy_man142003@yahoo.com
          love,
            shawna

GG
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2003-10-09 10:29 PM


snowflake,
sure does. Thank you very much

shawna,
hey thanks for the offer and care. I'm not thinking about suicide or anything though. I've been down that crisis path quite awhile ago... now I'm just at a stage where I'm content realising that to do whats right means life will be hard and everyone will turn their backs on me. Agian though, thank you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-10 11:16 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Alyssa, you sound troubled, sweet friend, I hope all is alright as this truly feels desperate! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-10-10 11:17 PM


Adored this..
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-10-11 05:14 AM


WHAM!

hit the nail right on the head!

Alyssa, I hate to see you in such pain. If you wanna talk, you know where I'm at, girlfriend. I'm praying for you every night.

GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2003-10-12 05:28 PM


Noah,
Thanks for your care, and your reply... you're always so sweet. This is so much deperate though, as just pained and real.

Aenimal,
good! glad ya did Thanks

Dixie,
see I'm not the only one with a twisted mind.. you agree! lol ...thansk much for your offer, and I appreciate those prayers more then you could ever know!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Saunni
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8 posted 2003-10-12 09:10 PM


GG, I can say I know this, have known it, what your words mean, that is. Many more people then you might realize understand those thoughts. Feel free, and I know you don't know me, to email me, anytime. I think peace can reside at heart when you have the understanding that "others" care and the extent of their hearts and the extent people will go. You're a beautiful person. Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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