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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-09 06:58 PM



I wonder what would happen,
If I could put all my frustration,
All my anger,
All my torment,
Into these very words I write now.

What would happen?...

I hear a whisper in the dark,
Trying to capture my attention,
But that’s all I hear…a whisper.
Nothing more comes to me,
As I sit here in this chair.

Nothing more...

A phone rings distantly,
What an annoying sound…
It breaks my concentration.
I wish I wasn’t so afraid,
Of my heart and mind….

Wasn’t so afraid...

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2003-10-09 10:45 PM


I wish I wasn’t so afraid,
Of my heart and mind….


Oh how I know this....
~~~~~~~~~

Greeneyes~


There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-09-2003 10:46 PM).]

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2003-10-10 12:14 PM


very good, I feel exactly what your saying well written, take care Rose
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-10 12:31 PM


I've felt this way before. I've wanted to write about things bothering me and just can't make myself do it. And yes, sometimes I've started to and the distractions would make me stop and I wouldn't finish. I do understand.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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Gaia
4 posted 2003-10-10 12:35 PM


Yes, a feeling many can relate to my friend,
and a good write.

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-10-10 01:28 AM


Oh wow!!I can remember these days where it seemed as if nothing would come because of the fear.Let loose those fears and know that my spirit is residing within you to take on all that will try to scare you.Write and let it flow out and you'll feel a new sense of kindling spirit overflowing into your tender heart.
Crystal

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6 posted 2003-10-10 08:42 AM


hey you, have you been reading my diary/journals again?  Even if you weren't my neice, Id still love ya gal....
like I said...he aint worth it hon....

very nice writing Staci...I'm loving every minute of it...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2003-10-10 08:47 AM


I hear a whisper in the dark,
Trying to capture my attention,
But that’s all I hear…a whisper.
Nothing more comes to me,
As I sit here in this chair.

Nothing more...

~*~

I know this moment.  Thank Goodness
they pass on to the shadows, letting
the light come in...

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