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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-09 05:03 PM

October’s Decent

yes,
I am
affected in
the change
of seasons
and it
has started
as the sun
has turned
the other way

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-10-09 05:31 PM

I am with you on this one... this poem said it all for me, and I think the ending is extraordinary! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-10-09 06:02 PM

I think we all are in one way or another, but there is always a promise for new beginnings...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-10-09 08:06 PM

the truth for me too..I have been complaining how much I am having trouble adjusting to the seasons change this year...

*s
M

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

4 posted 2003-10-09 08:45 PM

So am I!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-10-09 09:01 PM

Gee...I know this feeling well..
Love this!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-10-09 09:38 PM

....sigh

*swoon*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-10-09 10:01 PM

I honestly make a conscious effort to get more light into my life during winter months... so I don't slink off into the darkness. *S*

I like this very much, lady. *S*

Shawna Fitzgerald
Junior Member

since 2003-10-09

Posts 11

8 posted 2003-10-09 10:06 PM

that was touching i feal the sam way

love,
shawna

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

9 posted 2003-10-09 10:08 PM

one of these days ill be the first to say somethin and itll be good but im always late and the good ones are taken so ill just agree with all the others

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

10 posted 2003-10-09 11:46 PM

i hope you are affected pleasently. october is simply awesome.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-10-10 12:12 PM

Me, too, Helen...but I do so love
this time of year....if it just wouldn't
get colder. I love these temperatures.

Hugs,

Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2003-10-10 09:52 AM

Seasons change...every single day. The season that it is today can't have a name, because it has never been before and never will be again.

It is the same with the seasons inside us.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-10-10 10:31 AM

Lady~
You are some kinda' BEAUTIFUL~
I love the softness of you spilling down the page ...

You remind me of the ocean's beaches,
after the tide has come high,
waiting for your new poetic footprints upon the shore~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

14 posted 2003-10-10 01:13 PM

your work is just amazing...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2003-10-10 10:46 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, this is so very true, sweet friend, I always like my sun no matter what but I do like the colors and pleasant atmosphere of autumn! (sigh) May you always find your place in the sun, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

16 posted 2003-10-10 10:58 PM

"yes,
I am
affected in
the change
of seasons
and it
has started
as the sun
has turned
the other way". . .
and I relish
the loss
of it's heat
for my night
will be warmed
by you

Sorry slick, just had to!

Loved it...j.

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

17 posted 2003-10-11 12:38 PM

I like the way this poem hugs the side of the page, it makes the voice I read it a frail needful whisper. Yes, that's what this poem reminds me of, a whispered plea for sun and summer's return.... You're not alone there

Loved this.

Sherry

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

18 posted 2003-10-11 08:17 AM

Indeed - It must shine upon our southerly friends for a bit - Hunkering down here...

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