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"o" (waiting to happen) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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out there in the woods of modern highways they say there is a miracle waiting to happen as indelible ink meets smoothed surfaces of white sheets and a writer begins his scrawl trying to unravel shapes out of emotions some shapes show lunar faces others are more amoebic almost as if someone woke up and left sheets of linen behind used utilized one way or another it is a calamity waiting to happen on one side of the width on the other side it remains a miracle signs speak of existence of both me and you while we spend our energies interpreting the meanings just like writers and the ones who read their words we are both waiting to happen as the wild sea lashes at the rocks that bedeck the shorelines smoothing them into sand while a sculptor moulds the remains creating meanings of his own kismet [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (10-09-2003 04:23 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*picks herself up from the floor* into my library I say!!  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow. There really are no words. Well, I'm sure you would have some. You certainly have a way with them! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Give me a hand up too Ceinwyn? Please! Sudhi, you've knocked me over with this. Absolutely wonderful! Maree  p.s it's a pleasure to you read you m'freind fate is not just |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
they say there is a miracle waiting to happen as indelible ink meets smoothed surfaces of white sheets and a writer begins his scrawl trying to unravel shapes out of emotions ah.... my friend..I see you created another one of those miracles... love the lines above... and the whole of it...indeed. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Oh, my... I had forgotten how much I love your free verse, Sudhir. This is EXCELLENT! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ You *gift* us breathtaking beauty such as this, and dare to wonder that we would miss your verse ? Ahhhhh, 'tis kismet, indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
it is kismet, indeed, to be here and be sharing my thoughts with yours and feeling so welcome and appreciated all the way... thanks for all your kind words... I am honoured... regards, Sudhir |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific,,,, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sometimes we just gotta go with the flow, tremendous and powerful is this write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh! that's what came from my lips as I read this gem, Sudhir. What a beauty of a write! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"we are both waiting to happen as the wild sea lashes at the rocks that bedeck the shorelines smoothing them into sand while a sculptor moulds the remains creating meanings of his own kismet" beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir...Your poetry grows...has always been, but is more now...that is the way of beauty. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you... Thank you... Thank you all so very much regards, sudhir |
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