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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-10-09 02:10 PM

Bare shoulders beckon

At least the brush of lip.

You sat staring out the empty window

Thinking perhaps of the way the pains

Gave you vision to the other side

Of what seemed an endless array

Of golden leaves to tumble

Come some mid October rumble of storm

That would strip naked the limbs,

As naked as your skin

That shines with autumn’s light

While you ponder another year

Through this window

And leave me watching the change

Of shadow on the wall

Deepen the curve of your back

So that you are a living study

In black and white

Enticement.

My tongue wants the taste

Of your words mixed with mine

And not this silent reverie

You seem content to pose for

As if indeed  you have become a page

As yet unwritten but being read.

Your shiver told me



Bare shoulders begged the touch of lips

But bared souls

                         Beg more

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-09-2003 03:32 PM).]

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2003-10-09 02:19 PM

okie maybe I'm in want of you now lol j/k

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-09 02:19 PM

Enters the painter...

indeed, you portrayed her with your
excellent care, and grace...

thank you.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-10-09 02:24 PM

Ceinwyn lol... too cute... thank you..

Sunshine... not yet to my saitsfaction...
but not sure when it will be..lol..if ever

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-10-09 02:52 PM

Capt. Ron, Karilea is so right....you paint with words. Goodness, you're good!! I know I've told you before that I wish I could write like you and some of the others. You told me to write like myself. Well, maybe I can just study you, huh??
Hugs

Ethel

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

5 posted 2003-10-09 03:08 PM

"My tongue wants the taste
Of your words mixed with mine
And not this silent reverie
You seem content to pose for"

Oh my goodness! Simply wonderful. Well, not simply at all. ;-) Absolutely beautiful. And who can't understand that yearning for a sharing of thoughts and words and poetic conversation. With someone who's mind meets yours.

I love this poem.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-10-09 06:57 PM

And leave me watching the change

Of shadow on the wall

Deepen the curve of your back

So that you are a living study

In black and white

Enticement.
My tongue wants the taste

Of your words mixed with mine

And not this silent reverie

You seem content to pose for

As if indeed  you have become a page

As yet unwritten but being read.
Your shiver told me



Bare shoulders begged the touch of lips

But bared souls

                         Beg more
========================================
OH GOOD GRIEF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Have mercy...............
*shaking me head at you*

You better be careful...youre gonna cause a moth stampede LOL

oh and this moth aint beyond beggin honeychild.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-09 08:07 PM

Damn!!

I just drooled on the keyboard...LOL

WOW!! You just keep getting better and better.

Hugs.~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-10-09 08:20 PM

My tongue wants the taste
Of your words mixed with mine
And not this silent reverie
You seem content to pose for
As if indeed you have become a page
As yet unwritten but being read.

pardon my respacing but I
just loved it Ron...

*s
M

PoetryAngel013
New Member

since 2003-10-09

Posts 7