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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-10-09 02:00 PM





while we share a secret smile

other people's sins

fill me with sorrow

fly above the trees and

take me with you

as quickly as possible

despite the consequences

we have nothing but love

it cannot end this way

                                                                        

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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-10-09 02:32 PM


It's good to smile. That's a good thing!
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-10-09 02:37 PM


Glenn, this is pretty with a hint of
sadness about it.
Hugs  
Ethel

dertah
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3 posted 2003-10-09 03:52 PM


she never accepted my proposal to run away.  i wonder why.
Sunnyone
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4 posted 2003-10-09 05:06 PM


Some of us are afraid to leave the safety of what we know, but some of us find ourselves flying above the trees into the love waiting there....this poem was entrancing, and I loved it!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Bonnie j
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5 posted 2003-10-09 06:29 PM


Hi there Mr.Q. What is hidden behind YOUR
secret smile?
See Ya Bon-Bon

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-10-11 07:11 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Glenn, this is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I sure hope you have now found comfortable security of love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vandana
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7 posted 2003-10-11 07:14 PM


enjoy your read
James_A_Fraser
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8 posted 2003-10-11 07:35 PM


And it won't, unless you make that decision. Sometimes, not even then!



~~J

Margherita
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9 posted 2003-10-11 07:45 PM


The secret smile .... lifts you up above the trees .... may you always land softly in the arms of love.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Mystic One
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10 posted 2003-10-24 09:17 AM


secret smiles are glowing
Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2003-10-24 09:29 AM


Hey Q!  I loved the thought in this one...I would love to run away...but alas, those darn people I gave birth to are still a bit attached...

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

HopeS
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12 posted 2003-10-24 09:40 AM


Ohhh yes Glen secret smiles can glow for miles
Hope

LeeJ
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13 posted 2003-10-24 09:43 AM




Good one...very much enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-10-24 10:14 AM


"A secret smile" ~ I can just picture you with one!

~ Up, up, up and awaaaaaay!


EA

Come out, come out, wherever you are! Have you been hiding on us?!?

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2003-10-24 12:48 PM


Glenn~
This is PRECIOUS~

I'm voting with EarthyAngel ... get your booty in here ... you are greatly missed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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