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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-10-09 01:12 PM



Beside The Sapphire Sea

I found a secluded place
I saved for you and me
The golden sun is shining
Beside the sapphire sea

Upon the soft white sand
Perfect day it would be
As we walk hand in hand  
Beside the sapphire sea

Romance is for the taking
Here pleasures are free
White cap waves breaking
Beside the sapphire sea

Island haven of paradise
Waves rolling endlessly
Embrace in lovers rhythm
Beside the sapphire sea

HopeĀ©2003

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-10-09 01:16 PM


HopeS
A beautiful write.

Endlessecho
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2 posted 2003-10-09 01:17 PM


Love the beautiful descriptions!  
HopeS
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3 posted 2003-10-09 01:20 PM


Thank you Seymour as always for your sweet comments

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-10-09 01:22 PM


Thank you Endlessecho , I do live close to stretches of white sand and secluded beaches , it brings out the romantic in me
Hope

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-10-09 05:27 PM


Ah yes...you have the pleasure of some of the most beautiful beaches in the world in the land of Oz!!!!!  Lucky girl, and this poem made me want to head for the sea...right NOW!!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2003-10-10 01:22 PM


Oh I bet this beach is the most beautiful beach Hope.  I know you have most delightful beaches down there.  Beautiful writing.
~D~

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7 posted 2003-10-10 10:51 PM








(smiles) Oh Hope, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for ocean paradise to always fill your heart with siren songs of love and scenery as sapphire as the skies of heaven! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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8 posted 2003-10-10 10:57 PM


Very nice. Pretty images come to mind.

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

jwesley
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9 posted 2003-10-10 11:04 PM


Yep...put me there anytime...(especially in that hammock Noah has strung up)....wouldn't it be nice...enjoyed my friend.

jwesley

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-10-10 11:14 PM


Thank you sweet Noah , you pictured it just as it is .... all I need now is someone to enjoy the romance of it all LOL!!
Hope

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